M2 Second Submission

In order to perfect my pitch, I did a mock pitch where my peers asked me potential questions so that I could improve my pitch and be prepared for what the panel may ask me. Some of the questions I received were:

• Why is there a picture of chips under 'iconic locations'?

Chips may not be an iconic location to east London, but they are iconic to East London and I had an idea that involved chips from a chip shop. I made sure that in my notes, when I got to the 'Iconic Locations' section of my pitch, that I included something about why I had a picture of some chips.

                                                                 

• Why do you think that Victoria Park is a good place to find a marsh-habiting Boggart?

Marsh-habiting Boggarts like to live in areas of wildlife for example a forest/swamp/field. Victoria is one of the largest areas of wildlife in east London and is an iconic location to the east end of London. I made sure that in my notes, when I talk about my Iconic locations, I should go into detail about why Victoria Park is an ideal location to film the Boggart.

                                       

• What was the point in making 'Jaymie' the strong character if she is the character who needs to be saved from the Boggart in the end? 

It creates some character development for the character 'Sean' as he was the weakest character. It will be done in a way that does not undermine her original self. I included in my prezi some information about why I have made the decision to have Jaymie be attacked by the Boggart. Jaymie is an adventurous character and therefore would be more inclined to go after the Boggart. Sean couldn't be the character to find the Boggart as he is too meek and timid to search properly for him.

I then improved my pitch by including the extra information that I revealed whist answering the question.