P3 Second Submission

https://prezi.com/p/-qdhy9zotxzo/

This is the link to my pitch presentation, I created it in order to present my ideas to gain funding to produce the film.

P2 Second Submission

https://prezi.com/p/w2c0hoo7tzoy/

This is my treatment that I created for my short film. It is a detailed layout of my plan for the film. It is similar to my pitch presentation but in more detail.

M3 Second Submission

I think that my pitch went well as I was confident in what I was talking about and it was clear that I was knowledgeable about the film and everything to do with it. I think that my pitch could have been better by me being less nervous as I sometimes mumbled and rambled on at times. At the end of the pitch I was asked three questions to which I think I responded well to.

My first question was; 'do you have any thoughts on how you would promote the film if it was successfully produced?'

To which I answered confidently; 'yes, I think that a good way to advertise it would be with posters saying "The Boggart!" in a similar script to that of the 1958 'The Blob!' because it is mysterious and iconic and would attract attention'

The second question was 'why do you think you should be chosen?'

'I think my film should be chosen because it is a very good example of what the competition E3 legends is looking for because of the iconic locations and genre.'

The final question I was given was ' Do you think that the swamps and marshes that you said boggarts live in is a good thing to have associated with Victoria Park given its status and well maintained features?'

'I think that Victoria park is a good place to find the boggart because even though they are called marsh habiting boggarts, they live in any place of wildlife.'

Overall, I think that the question and answer section of my pitch went well, except that I was a bit nervous and rambled on in some of the questions and said "errr" a lot.

M2 Second Submission

In order to perfect my pitch, I did a mock pitch where my peers asked me potential questions so that I could improve my pitch and be prepared for what the panel may ask me. Some of the questions I received were:

• Why is there a picture of chips under 'iconic locations'?

Chips may not be an iconic location to east London, but they are iconic to East London and I had an idea that involved chips from a chip shop. I made sure that in my notes, when I got to the 'Iconic Locations' section of my pitch, that I included something about why I had a picture of some chips.

                                                                 

• Why do you think that Victoria Park is a good place to find a marsh-habiting Boggart?

Marsh-habiting Boggarts like to live in areas of wildlife for example a forest/swamp/field. Victoria is one of the largest areas of wildlife in east London and is an iconic location to the east end of London. I made sure that in my notes, when I talk about my Iconic locations, I should go into detail about why Victoria Park is an ideal location to film the Boggart.

                                       

• What was the point in making 'Jaymie' the strong character if she is the character who needs to be saved from the Boggart in the end? 

It creates some character development for the character 'Sean' as he was the weakest character. It will be done in a way that does not undermine her original self. I included in my prezi some information about why I have made the decision to have Jaymie be attacked by the Boggart. Jaymie is an adventurous character and therefore would be more inclined to go after the Boggart. Sean couldn't be the character to find the Boggart as he is too meek and timid to search properly for him.

I then improved my pitch by including the extra information that I revealed whist answering the question.